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fan-fiction… The Sacrificial Lamb by Lalina

authorJen | November 12, 2009

So, like I always say…

The standard disclaimer: If you haven’t read Twilight – GO READ IT!!! If you haven’t finished the series then skip this chatter because we might spoil something for you and we definitely don’t want to do that.

This Week’s Story:

The Sacrificial Lamb by Lalina

The Premise:

Edward Masen has one thing on his mind: Vengeance. When his mob boss kidnaps Bella Swan, he has a choice to make. Will the inexplicable pull he feels for his captive be enough to make him sacrifice his plans? AH ExB ~Lalina
We are going to start adding a little more spice to our weekly fan-fic recs as Donna is going to be helping me and giving her thoughts on the fics! So here goes…

Jen’s Thoughts:

This is another one that took me a while to get past the idea of it to actual read it. I was really nervous because with this premise it was really going to be hit or miss. I haven’t read any of Lalina’s other stories but with 8,000 + reviews something must be going right so I gave it a shot.

Um, yeah, I should have run to this one a lot sooner. Mobward…. scorching inferno of hotness. That should be included in the description.

Bella is awesome. She’s got some spunk that I sort of wish canon Bella had. There is one point in the story that I won’t give away that had me nearly doing a spit take with my trusty Diet Dr. Pepper because Bella gives Mobward a much deserved scolding in a way that is just hilarious.

This is one you don’t want to miss. It’s smart, funny, interesting, and don’t forget that scorching inferno of hotness I mentioned earlier. :)

Donna’s Thoughts:

When Jen first asked me to read The Sacrificial Lamb and help her review it, I was so excited…Because, if you know me, you know I love my Fan Fiction and I am always on the hunt for a well written story…. And…WOW… I wasn’t disappointed!!
First of all, this is extremely well written story and it has it all… Gangstars, a misunderstood hero, a damsel in distress and a little bit of the ”lemony” stuff…
I Love the way Lalina has entwined the characters, and with one simple twist turned our favourite leading man into a “bad boy” and a member of the Mob with a dark side. Lalina has given Mobward plenty of room to grow and become the man that makes…let’s face it ladies…your heart melt and maybe palpitate just a bit. I mean who wouldn’t want to be rescued, taken away to an secret hideaway, and spend 2 weeks in Mobwards protective custody?….
So if you want to add a little excitment, danger and romance to your Fan Fiction library…The Sacrificial Lamb is definitely one for you!
So there you have it… this one is definitely a keeper!! Let us know what you think!

As always there is more discussion over on the forums and if you are interested in more of our Twilight Tuesday fan-fic recommendations you can find them on our FanFiction.net C2: Twilight Good Reads. (click the subscribe link over at FF.net to get updates when we add new stories.)

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